Executed by Onieu bahn Duid (the USA) translation of Chapter 1 of the Book of Genesis from Hebrew to English testifies: the Bible describe not the primary act of creation, and revival of the destroyed old world and creation of the new earth, blue sky, winds, clouds, rains and sun warming and giving life. It allows to compare it with the sacred texts and legends of many other people in which creation of the new world occurs after the destruction of water-steam cover and is accompanied by reduction of life expectancy of people from 10 000 to 1000 years.
Comments by Laura Fitzpatrick (the USA)
And now for the comparison, of the two versions, verse by verse, starting with KJV, and then the tentative version of AMB (Ancient Modern Bible):
My first comment: notice the big difference between the KJV words and the words of the literal translation – for instance in the beginning is not equivalent to the shaking – how does shaking have anything to do with the great beginning of all things?
1In the beginning God created the heaven and the earth.
(The shaking, Shaper created the Heights and the Firms.)
Second comment: if Firms=earth, then wasted and empty is completely different than without form and void – wasted and empty implies destruction of something that already exists - without form and void does not imply destruction – it implies something that does not yet exist
2And the earth was without form, and void; and darkness was upon the face of the deep. And the Spirit of God moved upon the face of the waters.
(And the Firms were wasted and empty and Darkness the turn of the echo. And the Movement of Shaper cherished ascended the turn of the Waters.)
Third comment: Darkness the turn of the echo implies a distant remote place, a location where darkness resides and where the mechanical vibrations (sound) of an echo will literally turn around – a place with something like a solid wall – perhaps the end of the universe
Darkness was upon the face of the deep does not imply a place where something happens – it implies stillness rather than motion (deep=oceans)
Fourth comment: ascended the turn of the waters is more descriptive than moved upon the face (surface) of the waters – the waters are turning (moving somehow) and Shaper is ascending (going up) the turning waters - or perhaps they are frozen solid and Shaper is climbing up frozen waves
3And God said, Let there be light: and there was light.
(And Shaper said, "Be, Light" and Light was.)
4And God saw the light, that it was good: and God divided the light from the darkness.
(And Shaper saw the Light, that it was positive and Shaper separated from the light from the Darkness.)
5And God called the light Day, and the darkness he called Night. And the evening and the morning were the first day.
(And Shaper met the light as Heat, and the Darkness met as Folded-Back. And the pledge and the redemption; One Heat.)
Fifth comment: met the light as heat is not equal to called the light day – to meet the light as heat implies expansion – it also implies the first feeling of heat as if to warm something up – it is also causing light so the KJV translator chose to call it the first day – perhaps it was a temporary light
Sixth comment: darkness he called night is not equal to Darkness met as folded-back – to meet darkness as something that is folded back implies a barrier or the opposite of expansion – it implies a contraction (as one would expect with something devoid of heat) – so again, as above in third comment, darkness is some place where things (like mechanical sound vibrations) are forced to fold back upon themselves
Seventh comment: evening and morning is not equal to pledge and redemption – I don’t understand how pledge and redemption can be translated evening and morning – the entire literal text appears to be a scientific and legal explanation – and the KJV is more poetic – the poetry removes the scientific and legal meaning
Pledge and redemption have to do with paying off an obligation/debt- not with days of the week
Pledge = solemn binding promise, something given or held as security to guarantee payment of a debt, delivery of goods/property as security for a debt or obligation
Redemption = payment of an obligation, recovery of something mortgaged (or held as security), salvation thru sacrifice of Jesus
Eighth comment: one heat (probably means first heat as in first level of heat – i.e. first bit of heat from first light or electromagnetic energy)
6And God said, Let there be a firmament in the midst of the waters, and let it divide the waters from the waters.
(And Shaper said, "Stretch, be the severance of the Waters and divide the Waters from the Waters".)
Ninth comment: Stretch, be the severance of the waters implies expansion again – the waters are severed (cut sharply) by a stretching – firmament implies firmness or solidity which is not the same as expansion – so the theme of the literal translation is warming up and expansion and stretching – there is no similar theme to the KJV
Note: the word firmament caused ancient people from Mesopotamia, Greece, Egypt, India, early America and early Australia to believe the sky was a solid object – which of course is incorrect for today’s universe – we don’t know the original size and shape and configuration of the universe (presumably it was smaller in the past) – both translations are clearly talking about something that solidly separates the waters above (in heaven) and the waters below (oceans) – the literal translation implies a large distance of separation – this could be God separating His abode (home) from earth by a greater distance – this would be consistent with ancient mythologies of God being closer to earth in the past and visiting with Adam in the garden of Eden
7And God made the firmament, and divided the waters which were under the firmament from the waters which were above the firmament: and it was so.
(And Shaper did the stretch and divided the Waters which depressed the stretch from the Waters which ascended the stretch and erected.)
Tenth comment: same confusion between stretching (expansion) and a solid firmament
8And God called the firmament Heaven. And the evening and the morning were the second day.
(And Shaper met the stretch as Height. And the pledge and the redemption; Change Heat.)
11 th comment: change heat sounds like an increase in temperature or energy level because below this it says triple heat which is another increase in heat level – what I want to know is why would that be translated as the second day?? (maybe the light was temporary and it got dark again – but text doesn’t say that – but the first light would signify the first day I guess)
9And God said, Let the waters under the heaven be gathered together unto one place, and let the dry land appear: and it was so.
(And Shaper said, "The Waters of the Height, bind at one raise and dry see".)
12 th comment: bind means to pull together or bundle up together – it can also mean to encircle or surround - here it says bind at one raise the waters of the Height (Heaven) which implies the waters above were elevated – the waters above the firmament were elevated and expanded farther away from earth
The KJV says the waters under heaven
10And God called the dry land Earth; and the gathering together of the waters called he Seas: and God saw that it was good.
(And Shaper met the dry as Firms and the bound of the Waters met as Roars and Shaper saw it as positive.)
13 th comment: we have an expression the roaring waters – it means turbulent moving waters like found in a river with a lot of rocks and fast moving turbulent water – this could be springs of water gushing forth at higher elevation and tumbling down the new earth and forming the first rivers – see comment 20 below
11And God said, Let the earth bring forth grass, the herb yielding seed, and the fruit tree yielding fruit after his kind, whose seed is in itself, upon the earth: and it was so.
(And Shaper said, "Firms, sprout Sprout, Glisten sowing sow, and Produce Hard doing produce of its portion which sow Firms".)
14 th comment: Hard might be another word for abundantly – I am not sure
12And the earth brought forth grass, and herb yielding seed after his kind, and the tree yielding fruit, whose seed was in itself, after his kind: and God saw that it was good.
(And Firms departed Sprout, the Glisten sowing sow of its portion, and the Hard doing produce, sows of its portion, and Shaper saw it as positive.)
13And the evening and the morning were the third day.
(And the pledge and the redemption; Triple Heat.)
15 th comment: it sounds to me like the heat (which is causing expansion and is warming up the earth or universe or both) is now being tripled – it is increasing to three times what it was at one heat above in Verse 5
14And God said, Let there be lights in the firmament of the heaven to divide the day from the night; and let them be for signs, and for seasons, and for days, and years:
(And Shaper said "Lights the stretch of Heights, divide the Heat from the Folded-Back and consents and appointeds and Heats and Changes.)
16 th comment: this sounds like a permanent separation of the darkness/cold from the light/heat – perhaps this is a permanent separation of evil from goodness – see next comment below
15And let them be for lights in the firmament of the heaven to give light upon the earth: and it was so.
(And Lights the stretch of Heights, lighten Firms".)
16And God made two great lights; the greater light to rule the day, and the lesser light to rule the night: he made the stars also.
(And Shaper did changed magnified Lights; the magnified Light to rule the Heat and the loathed Light to rule the Folded-Back with the Burns.)
Comment 17: the KJV says two great lights were made – but the literal translation is very different – it says one great magnified light was made to rule what was warm with heat – and a loathed light was made to rule the folded-back
To magnify = to make larger, hold in greater esteem, increase in significance
to loathe = to hate, despise, abhor
so one larger, magnified highly esteemed light was made for what was warm with heat (warm = good?)
and a loathed, despised, hated light was made for the folded-back cold darkness (darkness = evil?)
17And God set them in the firmament of the heaven to give light upon the earth,
(And Shaper gave the stretch of Heights to lighten Firms)
Comment 18: Shaper caused another stretch or expansion to give light to earth
18And to rule over the day and over the night, and to divide the light from the darkness: and God saw that it was good.
(and rule the Heat and the Folded-Back and divide the light from the Darkness and Shaper saw it as positive.)
19And the evening and the morning were the fourth day.
(And the pledge and the redemption; Sprawl Heat.)
Comment 19: to sprawl is to spread or expand = so the heat is caused to spread out more again
20And God said, Let the waters bring forth abundantly the moving creature that hath life, and fowl that may fly above the earth in the open firmament of heaven.
(And Shaper said "Waters, teem Teems of breathed life and Flies flying ascended the Firms the turn stretch of the Height.)
21And God created great whales, and every living creature that moveth, which the waters brought forth abundantly, after their kind, and every winged fowl after his kind: and God saw that it was good.
(And Shaper created magnified elongations and living breaths creeping the Waters teeming of its portion and cornered Flies of its portion and Shaper saw it as positive.)
22And God blessed them, saying, Be fruitful, and multiply, and fill the waters in the seas, and let fowl multiply in the earth.
(And Shaper blessed, saying "Produce and multiply and fill the Waters, the Roars, and Flies, multiply, the Firms".)
Comment 20: here the word roars is used again and it is used separately from the waters – so it must signify springs of gushing water upon the earth as opposed to the waters of the oceans – these roars would then be springs, rivers that flow upon the earth and fresh water lakes – and the flies would be the skies
23And the evening and the morning were the fifth day.
(And the pledge and the redemption; Five Heat.)
Comment 21: another expansion of heat? Five times as much heat as before?
This is why I suspect the earth may have been frozen after a destruction event – in verse 1 above it says the shaking - then in Verse 2 it says the Firms (earth) earth are wasted and empty – now here in Verse 23 it is still expanding the heat (and still says nothing about days like the KJV)
24And God said, Let the earth bring forth the living creature after his kind, cattle, and creeping thing, and beast of the earth after his kind: and it was so.
(And Shapher said, "Firms, depart living breaths of its portion, Mutes of its portion, and Creeps and living Firms of its portion".)
25And God made the beast of the earth after his kind, and cattle after their kind, and every thing that creepeth upon the earth after his kind: and God saw that it was good.
(And Shaper did the living Firms of its portion, and Mutes of its portion, and Creeps the red of its portion and Shaper saw it as positive.)
Comment 22: the reds have something to do with the Creeps – I am not sure what the Mutes or the Creeps are – I can guess the Mutes are the animals that do not talk or make any sound because mute means unable to speak – so the Creeps may be the animals who can speak
The color red comes from the Sanskrit word for blood so the creeps may be the animals with blood – the Bible also says the life is in the blood – so it could have something to do with the spirit of life that is in us – maybe all animals with blood have the spirit of life which makes them different from other simpler life forms
26And God said, Let us make man in our image, after our likeness: and let them have dominion over the fish of the sea, and over the fowl of the air, and over the cattle, and over all the earth, and over every creeping thing that creepeth upon the earth.
(And Shaper said "Do Red as the shade likeness and rule Increases of the Roars, and the Flies of the Height, and Mutes, and Firms and Creeps that creep the Firms".)
27So God created man in his own image, in the image of God created he him; male and female created he them.
(And Shaper created Reds as the shade; the shade of Shaper created, remember and pierce created.)
Comment 23: this verse says red is the shade (color) of Shaper – so that could explain the KJV translation of man being created in the likeness (image) of God – the only other thing I can think of is the beginning of oxidation – such as the oxidation of iron which causes it to turn red and is the reason so many rocks are reddish
28And God blessed them, and God said unto them, Be fruitful, and multiply, and replenish the earth, and subdue it: and have dominion over the fish of the sea, and over the fowl of the air, and over every living thing that moveth upon the earth.
(And Shaper blessed and Shaper said "Produce and multiply and fill the Firms and subdue and rule the Increases of the Roars and the Flies of the Height, and the Creeps that creep the Firms.)
29And God said, Behold, I have given you every herb bearing seed, which is upon the face of all the earth, and every tree, in the which is the fruit of a tree yielding seed; to you it shall be for meat.
(And Shaper said "Consider given the Glisten sowing sows the turn of the Firms, and the Hard (the Produce of the Hard sowing sows), to be consumables)
30And to every beast of the earth, and to every fowl of the air, and to every thing that creepeth upon the earth, wherein there is life, I have given every green herb for meat: and it was so.
(And the living Firms, and the Flies of the Height, and Creeps of the Firms; living breaths, the spit Glisten is a consumable.)
31And God saw every thing that he had made, and, behold, it was very good. And the evening and the morning were the sixth day.
(And Shaper saw which He did as raking positive. And the pledge and the redemption; Six Heat.)
1Thus the heavens and the earth were finished, and all the host of them.
(Heights and Firms finished and assembled.)
2And on the seventh day God ended his work which he had made; and he rested on the seventh day from all his work which he had made.
(And the Swear Heat Shaper finished dispatchment doing and ceased, the Swear Heat, of dispatchment doing.)
Comment 24: This is the end of the heating up process – apparently now the heat is sufficient and can be maintained by some continuous process
3And God blessed the seventh day, and sanctified it: because that in it he had rested from all his work which God created and made.
(And Shaper blessed the Swear Heat and sanctified that ceasing of dispatchment Shaper created and did.)
© L Fitzpatrick, 2012 (comments)
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